What we changed:
- The beer can scene fits in more with the lyrics 'I don't drink like everybody else..'
- We added in a scene of my stuff on my dresser disappearing, as it looks effective and reinforces that she is leaving... and leaving him feeling 'empty'. While this may seem quite cheesy with these hidden emotions behind our work, it is sentimental to the song and therefore we see it as a must!
- We wanted to convey that she didn't answer her phone and actually talk, but that he left her a voicemail. To do this, when we were editing we recorded the voicemail woman speaking, we assume everyone is familiar with this as the audience use technology.
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